What is wrong with the following example:
Thus there arises the question of whether a central
database can be created in a manner which is consistent with
the need for efficiency and breadth of scope.
Answer:
- The author could omit needless words [Strunk,
Ch. 13]:
- One can say "The question arises..."
- The words "which is" can be deleted.
- The "which" is a wicked
one -- the clause "defines and restricts"