What is wrong with the following example:
In order to pinpoint the requirements for an effective
microchip development environment sufficiently to definitively
obtain answers to the above questions, it is essential to be able
to interview a wide variety of microchip developers who are
knowledgeable and experienced in such matters.
Answer:
- The sentence would be easier to understand if broken into two
sentences.
- The phrase "In order" is superfluous and can be dropped.
- "To definitively obtain" is a split infinitive.
- "to definitively obtain answers to" could be replaced by "to
answer definitively"
- "Essential to be able to" can be replaced by "necesary to."
- Replace "knowledgeable and experience" by "experts".
- The weak adverb "sufficiently" dropped without loss of
meaning.
- The phrase "a wide variety of" can be replaced by "many."
- The clause "who are knowledgeable and experienced in such
matters" can be replaced by one word: "expert."
- The repetition of "to" twice in the introductory phrase is
awkward; replace second "to" by "and."
Revised text:
To pinpoint the requirements for an effective microchip development
environment and answer definitively the above questions,
it is necessary to interview many expert microchip developers